In literacy today we wrote setting descriptions for the beginning of our Lighthouse Keepers Lunch stories. As a class we collected our ideas together and then had a go at some shared writing to help generate our success criteria. We then went off to have a go on our own and produced some fantastic pieces of work! Below is an example of some of the writing.

Here is Macy’s writing. I love how she has used ‘in the distance’ to describe where her thunder and lightening is.

 

Here is Aakriti’s writing. She was fantastic at growing her learning and having a go at her next steps.

 

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